WR 115 Workgroup Members: Justus Ballard, Sara Dennison, Jean Moynahan, Jeremy Trabue, and Michele Burke
WR115: Analytical Summary (100 minutes)
Read the essay “TITLE” by AUTHOR. Write a short analytical summary of the essay.
Your analytical summary should provide a clear general idea of the content and argument of the essay. You may find it useful to think about the following questions as you read:
What is the author talking about?
What does the author have to say about it?
How does the author support and explain the ideas in the essay?
In your analytical summary, you must:
tell me the topic of the essay, either by paraphrasing or quoting
paraphrase the thesis (main idea) or quote the thesis statement
paraphrase or summarize three main supports the author gives to accept her thesis (there may be more, but you can choose only the most important three)
Write your summary using Standard Written American English and complete sentences and paragraphs. Write a short introduction and conclusion, and use transitions between ideas. Do not turn in an outline or list. Maintain a formal tone.
Proofread and edit your work carefully. Basic writing is a major part of your grade.
You have until the end of class to complete this assignment. Use the time you have and make sure you’re turning in your best work. When you are finished, you may turn it in and leave.
OPTIONAL WORKSHEET —
JUST TO HELP YOU THINK CLEARLY
FINDING THE TOPIC
This essay raises the following question, problem, controversy, decision, judgment...
Write a noun phrase here. This is the TOPIC. Make sure it’s not too broad or too specific. It should not suggest issues not actually raised by the MAIN IDEA leave out anything that is covered by the MAIN IDEA.
e.g. The topic of his essay is free tuition at public colleges and universities.
FINDING THE MAIN IDEA
The author wants me to believe / agree / do (or thinks that) ...
Write a complete sentence that incorporates the topic here. This is the THESIS / MAIN IDEA (same thing!) Make sure it expresses a reasonable, debatable opinion. Make sure it’s not too broad or too narrow. It should not raise issues not supported by the body and there should not be anything in the body the thesis doesn’t relate to.
e.g. His main idea is that free tuition at public colleges is a bad idea, and he is against it.
FINDING THE SUPPORTS
Write complete sentences here; the reasons to agree with the thesis; the facts or expert opinions or logical conclusions that make the thesis believable and acceptable. Should always make sense if placed after THESIS + BECAUSE... Don’t just list the details that illustrate the point. Find the way the writer ties the support back to their thesis. Find their reasoning.
e.g. Kelly’s first support is a reminder that “free” college is of course not free, but rather represents shifting the cost from the students and their families on to all taxpayers.
Sample Analytical Summary
This sample analytical summary is just meant to provide you with one model of what a successful analytical essay of this length might look like. There are many different ways to accomplish this task, and each essay you summarize calls for its own approach, so you shouldn’t necessarily copy this sample in all ways.
Summary of “The Problem Is That Free College Isn’t Free”
“The Problem Is That Free College Isn’t Free” is a short essay written by Andrew Kelly, a scholar at the American Enterprise Institute. The topic of his essay is free tuition at public colleges and universities.
His main idea is that free tuition at public colleges is a bad idea, and should not be implemented. He proposes that public money for higher education be spent on those who need the most help rather than spreading it out to all students.
Kelly reminds us that “free” college is of course not free, but rather represents shifting the cost from the students and their families on to all taxpayers. It does not control the actual costs of providing a college education. It will probably actually lead costs to increase, as enrollment grows dramatically and some colleges may increase spending per student.
If future taxpayers are not willing to pay higher taxes to meet these new needs, colleges will have to reduce quality and turn away potential students they cannot afford to serve. The poorest students will have to compete with middle- and upper-income students for resources now equally available to everyone and will be disproportionally hurt.
Using community colleges as his test case, since federal financial aid already subsidizes most of the already very low tuition for low-income students, he points out that the majority of students don't get degrees within six years of starting, and the numbers are worse for the poorer students who get more public help. The real obstacles to getting Americans college degrees, he says, are the quality of the education being provided and the poor readiness for college of many incoming students.
He presents his thesis statement in his final paragraph: “Rather than spread scarce federal money across all students, policymakers should instead target those resources toward those who need it most and empower them to choose the option — public or private — that fits their needs.”
Students will practice writing with sources, including citing source material.
WR 115 Analytical Summary
Score submissions using common rubric then report student scores. Instructors receive an email invitation to report class scores later in the term (Fall 2016). Question - all scores for all students? Broken down by rubric/outcome area? -- According to Matt Blankenship, we will indeed be collecting the scores for each category of the rubric, and not just the total score.